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diff --git a/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml b/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml
index b78303afe..e3a9266e4 100644
--- a/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml
+++ b/man/sd_bus_request_name.xml
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
   along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
 -->
 
-<refentry id="sd_bus_request_name">
+<refentry id="sd_bus_request_name" conditional="ENABLE_KDBUS">
 
         <refentryinfo>
                 <title>sd_bus_request_name</title>
@@ -54,14 +54,14 @@
 
                         <funcprototype>
                                 <funcdef>int <function>sd_bus_request_name</function></funcdef>
-                                <paramdef>sd_bus* <parameter>bus</parameter></paramdef>
+                                <paramdef>sd_bus *<parameter>bus</parameter></paramdef>
                                 <paramdef>const char *<parameter>name</parameter></paramdef>
                                 <paramdef>uint64_t <parameter>flags</parameter></paramdef>
                         </funcprototype>
 
                         <funcprototype>
                                 <funcdef>int <function>sd_bus_release_name</function></funcdef>
-                                <paramdef>sd_bus* <parameter>bus</parameter></paramdef>
+                                <paramdef>sd_bus *<parameter>bus</parameter></paramdef>
                                 <paramdef>const char *<parameter>name</parameter></paramdef>
                         </funcprototype>
                 </funcsynopsis>
@@ -81,13 +81,13 @@
                                 <term><varname>SD_BUS_NAME_ALLOW_REPLACEMENT</varname></term>
 
                                 <listitem><para>After acquiring the
-                                name successuflly, permit other peers
+                                name successfully, permit other peers
                                 to take over the name when they try to
                                 acquire it with the
                                 <varname>SD_BUS_NAME_REPLACE_EXISTING</varname>
                                 flag set. If
                                 <varname>SD_BUS_NAME_ALLOW_REPLACEMENT</varname>
-                                is not set on the original request
+                                is not set on the original request,
                                 such a request by other peers will be
                                 denied.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -95,10 +95,10 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><varname>SD_BUS_NAME_REPLACE_EXISTING</varname></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>Take over a the name
-                                if it is already acquired by a another
-                                peer, and that other peer permitted
-                                taking it over by setting
+                                <listitem><para>Take over the name
+                                if it is already acquired by another
+                                peer, and that other peer has permitted
+                                takeover by setting
                                 <varname>SD_BUS_NAME_ALLOW_REPLACEMENT</varname>
                                 while acquiring it.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -106,8 +106,8 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><varname>SD_BUS_NAME_QUEUE</varname></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>Queue name
-                                acquisition when the name is already
+                                <listitem><para>Queue the acquisition
+                                of the name when the name is already
                                 taken.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
                 </variablelist>
@@ -125,10 +125,10 @@
                 errno-style error code.</para>
 
                 <para>If <varname>SD_BUS_NAME_QUEUE</varname> is
-                specified <function>sd_bus_request_name()</function>
+                specified, <function>sd_bus_request_name()</function>
                 will return 0 when the name is already taken by
                 another peer and the client has been added to the
-                queue for the name. In that case the caller can
+                queue for the name. In that case, the caller can
                 subscribe to <literal>NameOwnerChanged</literal>
                 signals to be notified when the name is successfully
                 acquired. <function>sd_bus_request_name()</function>
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><varname>-ESRCH</varname></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>It was attemted to
+                                <listitem><para>It was attempted to
                                 release a name that is currently not
                                 registered on the
                                 bus.</para></listitem>
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><varname>-EADDRINUSE</varname></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>It was attemted to
+                                <listitem><para>It was attempted to
                                 release a name that is owned by a
                                 different peer on the
                                 bus.</para></listitem>
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@
 
                                 <listitem><para>The bus connection has
                                 been created in a different process
-                                than the current.</para></listitem>
+                                than the current one.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
                 </variablelist>
         </refsect1>
@@ -209,9 +209,9 @@
 
                 <para>The <function>sd_bus_acquire_name()</function>
                 and <function>sd_bus_release_name()</function>
-                interfaces are available as shared library, which can
+                interfaces are available as a shared library, which can
                 be compiled and linked to with the
-                <constant>libsystemd-bus</constant> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
+                <constant>libsystemd</constant> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 file.</para>
         </refsect1>