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diff --git a/man/sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd.xml b/man/sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd.xml
index a9b892480..5b4a792cd 100644
--- a/man/sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd.xml
+++ b/man/sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd.xml
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<?xml version='1.0'?> <!--*-nxml-*-->
+<?xml version='1.0'?> <!--*- Mode: nxml; nxml-child-indent: 2; indent-tabs-mode: nil -*-->
 <!DOCTYPE refentry PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.2//EN"
 "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.2/docbookx.dtd">
 
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
       <funcprototype>
         <funcdef>int sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd</funcdef>
         <paramdef>sd_bus_message *<parameter>m</parameter></paramdef>
-        <paramdef>sd_memfd *<parameter>memfd</parameter></paramdef>
+        <paramdef>int <parameter>memfd</parameter></paramdef>
       </funcprototype>
 
       <funcprototype>
@@ -80,27 +80,27 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
   <refsect1>
     <title>Description</title>
 
-    <para>Functions
+    <para>The functions
     <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd</function> and
     <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_iovec</function> can be
     used to append a single string (item of type <literal>s</literal>)
     to message <parameter>m</parameter>.</para>
 
     <para>In case of
-    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd</function> the
+    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_memfd</function>, the
     contents of <parameter>memfd</parameter> are the string. They must
     satisfy the same constraints as described for the
     <literal>s</literal> type in
     <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_message_append_basic</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
     <para>In case of
-    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_iovec</function> the
+    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_iovec</function>, the
     payload of <parameter>iov</parameter> is the string. It must
     satisfy the same constraints as described for the
     <literal>s</literal> type in
     <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_message_append_basic</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
-    <para>Pointer <parameter>iov</parameter> must point to
+    <para>The <parameter>iov</parameter> argument must point to
     <parameter>n</parameter> <structname>struct iovec</structname>
     structures. Each structure may have the
     <structname>iov_base</structname> field set, in which case the
@@ -110,13 +110,13 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
     memory pointed at by <parameter>iov</parameter> may be changed
     after this call.</para>
 
-    <para>Function
-    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_space</function> appends
-    space for a string to message <parameter>m</parameter>. If behaves
-    similarly to <function>sd_bus_message_append_basic</function> with
+    <para>The
+    <function>sd_bus_message_append_string_space</function> function appends
+    space for a string to message <parameter>m</parameter>. It behaves
+    similar to <function>sd_bus_message_append_basic</function> with
     type <literal>s</literal>, but instead of copying a string into
-    the the message, it returns a pointer to the destination area to
-    the caller in pointer <parameter>p</parameter>. Space for string
+    the message, it returns a pointer to the destination area to
+    the caller in pointer <parameter>p</parameter>. Space for the string
     of length <parameter>size</parameter> plus the terminating
     <constant>NUL</constant> is allocated.</para>
   </refsect1>
@@ -133,9 +133,9 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
   <refsect1>
     <title>Notes</title>
 
-    <para>Functions described here are available as a shared library,
+    <para>The functions described here are available as a shared library,
     which can be compiled and linked to with the
-    <constant>libsystemd</constant> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
+    <constant>libsystemd</constant> <citerefentry project='die-net'><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
     file.</para>
   </refsect1>