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diff --git a/man/sd-id128.xml b/man/sd-id128.xml
index c194f5745..3a5e13306 100644
--- a/man/sd-id128.xml
+++ b/man/sd-id128.xml
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
                 <refname>SD_ID128_FORMAT_STR</refname>
                 <refname>SD_ID128_FORMAT_VAL</refname>
                 <refname>sd_id128_equal</refname>
-                <refpurpose>APIs for processing 128 bit IDs</refpurpose>
+                <refpurpose>APIs for processing 128-bit IDs</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
 
         <refsynopsisdiv>
@@ -68,12 +68,12 @@
                 <title>Description</title>
 
                 <para><filename>sd-id128.h</filename> provides APIs to
-                process and generate 128 bit ID values. The 128 bit ID
+                process and generate 128-bit ID values. The 128-bit ID
                 values processed and generated by these APIs are a
                 generalization of OSF UUIDs as defined by <ulink
-                url="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4122">RFC
-                4122</ulink>, though use a simpler string
-                formatting. These functions impose no structure on the
+                url="https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc4122">RFC
+                4122</ulink> but use a simpler string
+                format. These functions impose no structure on the
                 used IDs, much unlike OSF UUIDs or Microsoft GUIDs,
                 but are fully compatible with those types of IDs.
                 </para>
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
                 for more information about the implemented
                 functions.</para>
 
-                <para>A 128 bit ID is implemented as the following
+                <para>A 128-bit ID is implemented as the following
                 union type:</para>
 
                 <programlisting>typedef union sd_id128 {
@@ -93,26 +93,26 @@
         uint64_t qwords[2];
 } sd_id128_t;</programlisting>
 
-                <para>This union type allows accessing the 128 bit ID
-                as 16 separate bytes or two 64 bit words. It is generally
-                safer to access the ID components by their 8 bit array
+                <para>This union type allows accessing the 128-bit ID
+                as 16 separate bytes or two 64-bit words. It is generally
+                safer to access the ID components by their 8-bit array
                 to avoid endianness issues. This union is intended to
                 be passed call-by-value (as opposed to
                 call-by-reference) and may be directly manipulated by
                 clients.</para>
 
                 <para>A couple of macros are defined to denote and
-                decode 128 bit IDs:</para>
+                decode 128-bit IDs:</para>
 
                 <para><function>SD_ID128_MAKE()</function> may be used
-                to denote a constant 128 bit ID in source code. A
-                commonly used idiom is to assign a name to a 128 bit
+                to denote a constant 128-bit ID in source code. A
+                commonly used idiom is to assign a name to a 128-bit
                 ID using this macro:</para>
 
                 <programlisting>#define SD_MESSAGE_COREDUMP SD_ID128_MAKE(fc,2e,22,bc,6e,e6,47,b6,b9,07,29,ab,34,a2,50,b1)</programlisting>
 
                 <para><function>SD_ID128_CONST_STR()</function> may be
-                used to convert constant 128bit IDs into constant
+                used to convert constant 128-bit IDs into constant
                 strings for output. The following example code will
                 output the string
                 "fc2e22bc6ee647b6b90729ab34a250b1":</para>
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@
 
                 <para><function>SD_ID128_FORMAT_STR</function> and
                 <function>SD_ID128_FORMAT_VAL()</function> may be used
-                to format a 128 bit ID in a
+                to format a 128-bit ID in a
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>printf</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 format string, as shown in the following
                 example:</para>
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
         return 0;
 }</programlisting>
 
-                <para>Use <function>sd_id128_equal()</function> to compare two 128 bit IDs:</para>
+                <para>Use <function>sd_id128_equal()</function> to compare two 128-bit IDs:</para>
 
                 <programlisting>int main(int argc, char *argv[]) {
         sd_id128_t a, b, c;