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diff --git a/man/loginctl.xml b/man/loginctl.xml
index 790a3e4bf..1b54ff7dc 100644
--- a/man/loginctl.xml
+++ b/man/loginctl.xml
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
   along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
 -->
 
-<refentry id="loginctl" conditional='HAVE_PAM'>
+<refentry id="loginctl" conditional='ENABLE_LOGIND'>
 
         <refentryinfo>
                 <title>loginctl</title>
@@ -49,7 +49,10 @@
 
         <refsynopsisdiv>
                 <cmdsynopsis>
-                        <command>loginctl <arg choice="opt" rep="repeat">OPTIONS</arg> <arg choice="req">COMMAND</arg> <arg choice="opt" rep="repeat">NAME</arg></command>
+                        <command>loginctl</command>
+                        <arg choice="opt" rep="repeat">OPTIONS</arg>
+                        <arg choice="req">COMMAND</arg>
+                        <arg choice="opt" rep="repeat">NAME</arg>
                 </cmdsynopsis>
         </refsynopsisdiv>
 
@@ -88,14 +91,14 @@
                                 <term><option>--property=</option></term>
 
                                 <listitem><para>When showing
-                                session/user properties, limit
+                                session/user/seat properties, limit
                                 display to certain properties as
                                 specified as argument. If not
-                                specified all set properties are
+                                specified, all set properties are
                                 shown. The argument should be a
                                 property name, such as
                                 <literal>Sessions</literal>. If
-                                specified more than once all
+                                specified more than once, all
                                 properties with the specified names
                                 are shown.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -105,7 +108,7 @@
                                 <term><option>--all</option></term>
 
                                 <listitem><para>When showing
-                                unit/job/manager properties, show all
+                                session/user/seat properties, show all
                                 properties regardless whether they are
                                 set or not.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -114,8 +117,8 @@
                                 <term><option>-l</option></term>
                                 <term><option>--full</option></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>Do not ellipsize cgroup
-                                members.</para>
+                                <listitem><para>Do not ellipsize
+                                process tree entries.</para>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
@@ -129,7 +132,7 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><option>--no-ask-password</option></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>Don't query the user
+                                <listitem><para>Do not query the user
                                 for authentication for privileged
                                 operations.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -161,7 +164,7 @@
                                 <constant>SIGTERM</constant>,
                                 <constant>SIGINT</constant> or
                                 <constant>SIGSTOP</constant>. If
-                                omitted defaults to
+                                omitted, defaults to
                                 <constant>SIGTERM</constant>.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
@@ -214,14 +217,14 @@
 
                                 <listitem><para>Show properties of one
                                 or more sessions or the manager
-                                itself. If no argument is specified
+                                itself. If no argument is specified,
                                 properties of the manager will be
-                                shown. If a session ID is specified
-                                properties of the session is shown. By
+                                shown. If a session ID is specified,
+                                properties of the session are shown. By
                                 default, empty properties are
                                 suppressed. Use <option>--all</option>
                                 to show those too. To select specific
-                                properties to show use
+                                properties to show, use
                                 <option>--property=</option>. This
                                 command is intended to be used
                                 whenever computer-parsable output is
@@ -317,7 +320,7 @@
                                 default, empty properties are
                                 suppressed. Use <option>--all</option>
                                 to show those too. To select specific
-                                properties to show use
+                                properties to show, use
                                 <option>--property=</option>. This
                                 command is intended to be used
                                 whenever computer-parsable output is
@@ -337,7 +340,7 @@
                                 enabled for a specific user, a user
                                 manager is spawned for him/her at
                                 boot and kept around after
-                                logouts. This allows users who aren't
+                                logouts. This allows users who are not
                                 logged in to run long-running
                                 services.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -455,7 +458,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Exit status</title>
 
-                <para>On success 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
+                <para>On success, 0 is returned, a non-zero failure
                 code otherwise.</para>
         </refsect1>