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                 directive.</para>
 
                 <para>If a line starts with <option>.include</option>
-                followed by a file name, the specified file will be
+                followed by a filename, the specified file will be
                 parsed at this point. Make sure that the file that is
                 included has the appropriate section headers before
                 any directives.</para>
                 with the device node <filename noindex='true'>/dev/sda</filename> in
                 the file system namespace. If this applies a special
                 way to escape the path name is used, so that the
-                result is usable as part of a file name. Basically,
+                result is usable as part of a filename. Basically,
                 given a path, "/" is replaced by "-", and all
                 unprintable characters and the "-" are replaced by
                 C-style "\x20" escapes. The root directory "/" is
 
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><varname>Documentation=</varname></term>
-                                <listitem><para>A space separated list
+                                <listitem><para>A space-separated list
                                 of URIs referencing documentation for
                                 this unit or its
                                 configuration. Accepted are only URIs
                                 <literal>info:</literal>,
                                 <literal>man:</literal>. For more
                                 information about the syntax of these
-                                URIs see
+                                URIs, see
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>uri</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>. The
                                 URIs should be listed in order of
                                 relevance, starting with the most
                                 option may be specified more than once
                                 in which case the specified list of
                                 URIs is merged. If the empty string is
-                                assigned to this option the list is
+                                assigned to this option, the list is
                                 reset and all prior assignments will
                                 have no effect.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><varname>RequiresMountsFor=</varname></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>Takes a space
-                                separated list of absolute paths. Automatically
+                                <listitem><para>Takes a space-separated
+                                list of absolute paths. Automatically
                                 adds dependencies of type
                                 <varname>Requires=</varname> and
                                 <varname>After=</varname> for all
 
                                 <para><varname>ConditionHost=</varname>
                                 may be used to match against the
-                                host name or machine ID of the
-                                host. This either takes a host name
+                                hostname or machine ID of the
+                                host. This either takes a hostname
                                 string (optionally with shell style
                                 globs) which is tested against the
-                                locally set host name as returned by
+                                locally set hostname as returned by
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>gethostname</refentrytitle><manvolnum>2</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
                                 or a machine ID formatted as string
                                 (see
                                 time,
                                 <command>systemctl enable</command>
                                 will create symlinks from these names
-                                to the unit file name.</para></listitem>
+                                to the unit filename.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
                       </row>
                       <row>
                         <entry><literal>%f</literal></entry>
-                        <entry>Unescaped file name</entry>
+                        <entry>Unescaped filename</entry>
                         <entry>This is either the unescaped instance name (if applicable) with <filename>/</filename> prepended (if applicable), or the prefix name similarly prepended with <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
                       </row>
                       <row>
                       <row>
                         <entry><literal>%H</literal></entry>
                         <entry>Host name</entry>
-                        <entry>The host name of the running system.</entry>
+                        <entry>The hostname of the running system.</entry>
                       </row>
                       <row>
                         <entry><literal>%%</literal></entry>