doc: reword "shared per-thread" wording

[elogind.git] / man / systemd.special.xml

diff --git a/man/systemd.special.xml b/man/systemd.special.xml
index 7dbc5580e26e20d620004dd8bbe96184d177ad8d..8ccccc2798713a4b0f6a7d1d9fdee0781d320ce0 100644 (file)
--- a/man/systemd.special.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.special.xml
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@
                                         this unit during
                                         installation. This is best
                                         configured via
                                         this unit during
                                         installation. This is best
                                         configured via

-                                        <varname>WantedBy=multi-uer.target</varname>
+                                        <varname>WantedBy=multi-user.target</varname>

                                         in the unit's
                                         <literal>[Install]</literal>
                                         section.</para>
                                         in the unit's
                                         <literal>[Install]</literal>
                                         section.</para>


@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@
                                         after it. Note that networking
                                         daemons that simply provide
                                         functionality to other hosts
                                         after it. Note that networking
                                         daemons that simply provide
                                         functionality to other hosts

-                                        generally don't need to pull
+                                        generally do not need to pull

                                         this in.</para>
                                         </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
                                         this in.</para>
                                         </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>


@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@
                 services. These targets are generally not part of the
                 initial boot transaction, unless they are explicitly
                 pulled in by one of the implementing services. Note
                 services. These targets are generally not part of the
                 initial boot transaction, unless they are explicitly
                 pulled in by one of the implementing services. Note

-                specifically, that these <emphasis>passive</emphasis>
+                specifically that these <emphasis>passive</emphasis>

                 target units are generally not pulled in by the
                 consumer of a service, but by the provider of the
                 service. This means: a consuming service should order
                 target units are generally not pulled in by the
                 consumer of a service, but by the provider of the
                 service. This means: a consuming service should order


@@ -939,7 +939,7 @@
                                         <varname>Wants=</varname> type
                                         dependency. If the unit wants
                                         to be pulled in by the first
                                         <varname>Wants=</varname> type
                                         dependency. If the unit wants
                                         to be pulled in by the first

-                                        remote mount showing up it
+                                        remote mount showing up, it

                                         should use
                                         <filename>network-online.target</filename>
                                         (see above).</para>
                                         should use
                                         <filename>network-online.target</filename>
                                         (see above).</para>


@@ -996,7 +996,7 @@
                 <filename>smartcard.target</filename>,
                 <filename>sound.target</filename>.</para>
 
                 <filename>smartcard.target</filename>,
                 <filename>sound.target</filename>.</para>
 

-                <para>In addition the following special unit is
+                <para>In addition, the following special unit is

                 understood only when systemd runs as service instance:</para>
 
                 <variablelist>
                 understood only when systemd runs as service instance:</para>
 
                 <variablelist>


@@ -1012,7 +1012,7 @@
                                         manager should start this
                                         unit. If systemd receives
                                         <constant>SIGTERM</constant> or <constant>SIGINT</constant> when running
                                         manager should start this
                                         unit. If systemd receives
                                         <constant>SIGTERM</constant> or <constant>SIGINT</constant> when running

-                                        as user service daemon it will
+                                        as user service daemon, it will

                                         start this unit.</para>
 
                                         <para>Normally, this pulls in
                                         start this unit.</para>
 
                                         <para>Normally, this pulls in


@@ -1039,40 +1039,44 @@
                                 <term><filename>-.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>
                                         <para>The root slice is the
                                 <term><filename>-.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>
                                         <para>The root slice is the

-                                        root of the hierarchy. It does
-                                        not contain services directly,
-                                        but is used to set defaults
-                                        for the whole tree.</para>
+                                        root of the hierarchy. It
+                                        usually does not contain units
+                                        directly, but may be used to
+                                        set defaults for the whole
+                                        tree.</para>

                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><filename>system.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><filename>system.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>

-                                        <para>This slice contains
+                                        <para>By default, all services

                                         services started by
                                         services started by

-                                        <command>systemd</command>.</para>
+                                        <command>systemd</command> are
+                                        found in this slice.</para>

                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><filename>user.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><filename>user.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>

-                                        <para>This slice contains user
+                                        <para>By default, all user

                                         processes and services started
                                         on behalf of the user,
                                         including the per-user systemd
                                         processes and services started
                                         on behalf of the user,
                                         including the per-user systemd

-                                        instance.</para>
+                                        instance are found in this
+                                        slice.</para>

                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><filename>machine.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><filename>machine.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>

-                                        <para>This slice contains
-                                        virtual machines and
-                                        containers registered with
-                                        <command>systemd-machined</command>.
+                                        <para>By defalt, all virtual
+                                        machines and containers
+                                        registered with
+                                        <command>systemd-machined</command>
+                                        are found in this slice.

                                         </para>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
                                         </para>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>