doc: reword "shared per-thread" wording

[elogind.git] / man / systemd.special.xml

diff --git a/man/systemd.special.xml b/man/systemd.special.xml
index 7dbc5580e26e20d620004dd8bbe96184d177ad8d..8ccccc2798713a4b0f6a7d1d9fdee0781d320ce0 100644 (file)
--- a/man/systemd.special.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.special.xml
@@ -385,7 +385,7 @@
                                         this unit during
                                         installation. This is best
                                         configured via
-                                        <varname>WantedBy=multi-uer.target</varname>
+                                        <varname>WantedBy=multi-user.target</varname>
                                         in the unit's
                                         <literal>[Install]</literal>
                                         section.</para>
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@
                                         after it. Note that networking
                                         daemons that simply provide
                                         functionality to other hosts
-                                        generally don't need to pull
+                                        generally do not need to pull
                                         this in.</para>
                                         </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@
                 services. These targets are generally not part of the
                 initial boot transaction, unless they are explicitly
                 pulled in by one of the implementing services. Note
-                specifically, that these <emphasis>passive</emphasis>
+                specifically that these <emphasis>passive</emphasis>
                 target units are generally not pulled in by the
                 consumer of a service, but by the provider of the
                 service. This means: a consuming service should order
@@ -939,7 +939,7 @@
                                         <varname>Wants=</varname> type
                                         dependency. If the unit wants
                                         to be pulled in by the first
-                                        remote mount showing up it
+                                        remote mount showing up, it
                                         should use
                                         <filename>network-online.target</filename>
                                         (see above).</para>
@@ -996,7 +996,7 @@
                 <filename>smartcard.target</filename>,
                 <filename>sound.target</filename>.</para>
 
-                <para>In addition the following special unit is
+                <para>In addition, the following special unit is
                 understood only when systemd runs as service instance:</para>
 
                 <variablelist>
@@ -1012,7 +1012,7 @@
                                         manager should start this
                                         unit. If systemd receives
                                         <constant>SIGTERM</constant> or <constant>SIGINT</constant> when running
-                                        as user service daemon it will
+                                        as user service daemon, it will
                                         start this unit.</para>
 
                                         <para>Normally, this pulls in
@@ -1039,40 +1039,44 @@
                                 <term><filename>-.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>
                                         <para>The root slice is the
-                                        root of the hierarchy. It does
-                                        not contain services directly,
-                                        but is used to set defaults
-                                        for the whole tree.</para>
+                                        root of the hierarchy. It
+                                        usually does not contain units
+                                        directly, but may be used to
+                                        set defaults for the whole
+                                        tree.</para>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><filename>system.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>
-                                        <para>This slice contains
+                                        <para>By default, all services
                                         services started by
-                                        <command>systemd</command>.</para>
+                                        <command>systemd</command> are
+                                        found in this slice.</para>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><filename>user.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>
-                                        <para>This slice contains user
+                                        <para>By default, all user
                                         processes and services started
                                         on behalf of the user,
                                         including the per-user systemd
-                                        instance.</para>
+                                        instance are found in this
+                                        slice.</para>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><filename>machine.slice</filename></term>
                                 <listitem>
-                                        <para>This slice contains
-                                        virtual machines and
-                                        containers registered with
-                                        <command>systemd-machined</command>.
+                                        <para>By defalt, all virtual
+                                        machines and containers
+                                        registered with
+                                        <command>systemd-machined</command>
+                                        are found in this slice.
                                         </para>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>