doc: reword "shared per-thread" wording

[elogind.git] / man / systemd.special.xml

diff --git a/man/systemd.special.xml b/man/systemd.special.xml
index 2900808ef4e42c9f3475fab4cd9b39599905755d..8ccccc2798713a4b0f6a7d1d9fdee0781d320ce0 100644 (file)
--- a/man/systemd.special.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.special.xml
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@
                                         after it. Note that networking
                                         daemons that simply provide
                                         functionality to other hosts
                                         after it. Note that networking
                                         daemons that simply provide
                                         functionality to other hosts

-                                        generally don't need to pull
+                                        generally do not need to pull

                                         this in.</para>
                                         </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
                                         this in.</para>
                                         </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>


@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@
                 services. These targets are generally not part of the
                 initial boot transaction, unless they are explicitly
                 pulled in by one of the implementing services. Note
                 services. These targets are generally not part of the
                 initial boot transaction, unless they are explicitly
                 pulled in by one of the implementing services. Note

-                specifically, that these <emphasis>passive</emphasis>
+                specifically that these <emphasis>passive</emphasis>

                 target units are generally not pulled in by the
                 consumer of a service, but by the provider of the
                 service. This means: a consuming service should order
                 target units are generally not pulled in by the
                 consumer of a service, but by the provider of the
                 service. This means: a consuming service should order


@@ -939,7 +939,7 @@
                                         <varname>Wants=</varname> type
                                         dependency. If the unit wants
                                         to be pulled in by the first
                                         <varname>Wants=</varname> type
                                         dependency. If the unit wants
                                         to be pulled in by the first

-                                        remote mount showing up it
+                                        remote mount showing up, it

                                         should use
                                         <filename>network-online.target</filename>
                                         (see above).</para>
                                         should use
                                         <filename>network-online.target</filename>
                                         (see above).</para>


@@ -996,7 +996,7 @@
                 <filename>smartcard.target</filename>,
                 <filename>sound.target</filename>.</para>
 
                 <filename>smartcard.target</filename>,
                 <filename>sound.target</filename>.</para>
 

-                <para>In addition the following special unit is
+                <para>In addition, the following special unit is

                 understood only when systemd runs as service instance:</para>
 
                 <variablelist>
                 understood only when systemd runs as service instance:</para>
 
                 <variablelist>


@@ -1012,7 +1012,7 @@
                                         manager should start this
                                         unit. If systemd receives
                                         <constant>SIGTERM</constant> or <constant>SIGINT</constant> when running
                                         manager should start this
                                         unit. If systemd receives
                                         <constant>SIGTERM</constant> or <constant>SIGINT</constant> when running

-                                        as user service daemon it will
+                                        as user service daemon, it will

                                         start this unit.</para>
 
                                         <para>Normally, this pulls in
                                         start this unit.</para>
 
                                         <para>Normally, this pulls in