doc: reword "shared per-thread" wording

[elogind.git] / man / systemd.special.xml

diff --git a/man/systemd.special.xml b/man/systemd.special.xml
index 2900808ef4e42c9f3475fab4cd9b39599905755d..8ccccc2798713a4b0f6a7d1d9fdee0781d320ce0 100644 (file)
--- a/man/systemd.special.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.special.xml
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@
                                         after it. Note that networking
                                         daemons that simply provide
                                         functionality to other hosts
-                                        generally don't need to pull
+                                        generally do not need to pull
                                         this in.</para>
                                         </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -820,7 +820,7 @@
                 services. These targets are generally not part of the
                 initial boot transaction, unless they are explicitly
                 pulled in by one of the implementing services. Note
-                specifically, that these <emphasis>passive</emphasis>
+                specifically that these <emphasis>passive</emphasis>
                 target units are generally not pulled in by the
                 consumer of a service, but by the provider of the
                 service. This means: a consuming service should order
@@ -939,7 +939,7 @@
                                         <varname>Wants=</varname> type
                                         dependency. If the unit wants
                                         to be pulled in by the first
-                                        remote mount showing up it
+                                        remote mount showing up, it
                                         should use
                                         <filename>network-online.target</filename>
                                         (see above).</para>
@@ -996,7 +996,7 @@
                 <filename>smartcard.target</filename>,
                 <filename>sound.target</filename>.</para>
 
-                <para>In addition the following special unit is
+                <para>In addition, the following special unit is
                 understood only when systemd runs as service instance:</para>
 
                 <variablelist>
@@ -1012,7 +1012,7 @@
                                         manager should start this
                                         unit. If systemd receives
                                         <constant>SIGTERM</constant> or <constant>SIGINT</constant> when running
-                                        as user service daemon it will
+                                        as user service daemon, it will
                                         start this unit.</para>
 
                                         <para>Normally, this pulls in