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                                 <listitem><para>Configures controllers
                                 that shall be mounted in a single
-                                hierarchy. By default systemd will
+                                hierarchy. By default, systemd will
                                 mount all controllers which are
                                 enabled in the kernel in individual
                                 hierarchies, with the exception of
                                 necessary to rebuild the initrd if
                                 this option is changed, and make sure
                                 the new configuration file is included
-                                in it. Otherwise the initrd might
+                                in it. Otherwise, the initrd might
                                 mount the controller hierarchies in a
                                 different configuration than intended,
                                 and the main system cannot remount
                                 <literal>d</literal>,
                                 <literal>w</literal>). If
                                 <varname>RuntimeWatchdogSec=</varname>
-                                is set to a non-zero value the
+                                is set to a non-zero value, the
                                 watchdog hardware
                                 (<filename>/dev/watchdog</filename>)
                                 will be programmed to automatically
                                 Capabilities listed will be included
                                 in the bounding set, all others are
                                 removed. If the list of capabilities
-                                is prefixed with ~ all but the listed
+                                is prefixed with ~, all but the listed
                                 capabilities will be included, the
                                 effect of the assignment
                                 inverted. Note that this option also