man: wording and grammar updates

[elogind.git] / man / systemd-halt.service.xml

diff --git a/man/systemd-halt.service.xml b/man/systemd-halt.service.xml
index 812281e60d5e0cb2e006b70bfe13b680fecc1c7e..2fd7b8bf80d5481087c01dd1db77efbf5259fe21 100644 (file)
--- a/man/systemd-halt.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-halt.service.xml
@@ -74,11 +74,11 @@
                 <filename>kexec.target</filename> to execute the
                 respective actions.</para>
 
-                <para>When these services are run they ensure that PID
+                <para>When these services are run, they ensure that PID
                 1 is replaced by the
                 <filename>/usr/lib/systemd/systemd-shutdown</filename>
                 tool which is then responsible for the actual
-                shutdown. Before shutting down this binary will try to
+                shutdown. Before shutting down, this binary will try to
                 unmount all remaining file systems, disable all
                 remaining swap devices, detach all remaining storage
                 devices and kill all remaining processes.</para>