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                                 cannot be used to reload unit
                                 configuration. Use the
                                 <command>daemon-reload</command>
                                 cannot be used to reload unit
                                 configuration. Use the
                                 <command>daemon-reload</command>
-                                command for that. All in all this
+                                command for that. All in all, this
                                 command is of little use except for
                                 debugging.</para>
                                 <para>This command should not be
                                 command is of little use except for
                                 debugging.</para>
                                 <para>This command should not be
                                 <term><command>snapshot [NAME]</command></term>
 
                                 <listitem><para>Create a snapshot. If
                                 <term><command>snapshot [NAME]</command></term>
 
                                 <listitem><para>Create a snapshot. If
-                                a snapshot name is specified the new
+                                a snapshot name is specified, the new
                                 snapshot will be named after it. If
                                 none is specified an automatic
                                 snapshot name is generated. In either
                                 snapshot will be named after it. If
                                 none is specified an automatic
                                 snapshot name is generated. In either
-                                case the snapshot name used is printed
+                                case, the snapshot name used is printed
                                 to STDOUT.</para>
 
                                 <para>A snapshot refers to a saved
                                 to STDOUT.</para>
 
                                 <para>A snapshot refers to a saved
                                 configuration. This will reload all
                                 unit files and recreate the entire
                                 dependency tree. While the daemon is
                                 configuration. This will reload all
                                 unit files and recreate the entire
                                 dependency tree. While the daemon is
-                                reloaded all sockets systemd listens
-                                on on behalf of user configuration will
+                                reloaded, all sockets systemd listens
+                                on on behalf of user configuration, will
                                 stay accessible.</para> <para>This
                                 command should not be confused with
                                 the <command>load</command> or
                                 stay accessible.</para> <para>This
                                 command should not be confused with
                                 the <command>load</command> or