man: wording and grammar updates

[elogind.git] / man / sd_notify.xml

diff --git a/man/sd_notify.xml b/man/sd_notify.xml
index fc0f2f69273f0377cf56f2f8cf62f49857e692f5..55965ffce4e999d9f0a1b34e1b674683976cf497 100644 (file)
--- a/man/sd_notify.xml
+++ b/man/sd_notify.xml
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
                 notification.</para>
 
                 <para>If the <parameter>unset_environment</parameter>
                 notification.</para>
 
                 <para>If the <parameter>unset_environment</parameter>

-                parameter is non-zero <function>sd_notify()</function>
+                parameter is non-zero, <function>sd_notify()</function>

                 will unset the <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname>
                 environment variable before returning (regardless
                 whether the function call itself succeeded or
                 will unset the <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname>
                 environment variable before returning (regardless
                 whether the function call itself succeeded or


@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@
                 errno-style error code. If
                 <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> was not set and
                 hence no status data could be sent, 0 is returned. If
                 errno-style error code. If
                 <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> was not set and
                 hence no status data could be sent, 0 is returned. If

-                the status was sent these functions return with a
+                the status was sent, these functions return with a

                 positive return value. In order to support both, init
                 systems that implement this scheme and those which
                 do not, it is generally recommended to ignore the return
                 positive return value. In order to support both, init
                 systems that implement this scheme and those which
                 do not, it is generally recommended to ignore the return


@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
                 <constant>AF_UNIX</constant> socket referenced in the
                 <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> environment
                 variable. If the first character of
                 <constant>AF_UNIX</constant> socket referenced in the
                 <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> environment
                 variable. If the first character of

-                <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> is <literal>@</literal> the string is
+                <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> is <literal>@</literal>, the string is

                 understood as Linux abstract namespace socket. The
                 datagram is accompanied by the process credentials of
                 the sending daemon, using SCM_CREDENTIALS.</para>
                 understood as Linux abstract namespace socket. The
                 datagram is accompanied by the process credentials of
                 the sending daemon, using SCM_CREDENTIALS.</para>


@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@
 
                 <para>If the reference implementation is used as
                 drop-in files and -DDISABLE_SYSTEMD is set during
 
                 <para>If the reference implementation is used as
                 drop-in files and -DDISABLE_SYSTEMD is set during

-                compilation these functions will always return 0 and
+                compilation, these functions will always return 0 and

                 otherwise become a NOP.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
                 otherwise become a NOP.</para>
         </refsect1>