man: wording and grammar updates

[elogind.git] / man / sd_notify.xml

diff --git a/man/sd_notify.xml b/man/sd_notify.xml
index fc0f2f69273f0377cf56f2f8cf62f49857e692f5..55965ffce4e999d9f0a1b34e1b674683976cf497 100644 (file)
--- a/man/sd_notify.xml
+++ b/man/sd_notify.xml
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
                 notification.</para>
 
                 <para>If the <parameter>unset_environment</parameter>
-                parameter is non-zero <function>sd_notify()</function>
+                parameter is non-zero, <function>sd_notify()</function>
                 will unset the <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname>
                 environment variable before returning (regardless
                 whether the function call itself succeeded or
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@
                 errno-style error code. If
                 <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> was not set and
                 hence no status data could be sent, 0 is returned. If
-                the status was sent these functions return with a
+                the status was sent, these functions return with a
                 positive return value. In order to support both, init
                 systems that implement this scheme and those which
                 do not, it is generally recommended to ignore the return
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
                 <constant>AF_UNIX</constant> socket referenced in the
                 <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> environment
                 variable. If the first character of
-                <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> is <literal>@</literal> the string is
+                <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> is <literal>@</literal>, the string is
                 understood as Linux abstract namespace socket. The
                 datagram is accompanied by the process credentials of
                 the sending daemon, using SCM_CREDENTIALS.</para>
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@
 
                 <para>If the reference implementation is used as
                 drop-in files and -DDISABLE_SYSTEMD is set during
-                compilation these functions will always return 0 and
+                compilation, these functions will always return 0 and
                 otherwise become a NOP.</para>
         </refsect1>