man: updates to the passive target section

[elogind.git] / man / sd_id128_randomize.xml

diff --git a/man/sd_id128_randomize.xml b/man/sd_id128_randomize.xml
index 15e17619d061e6069d759b07753d3a03ce2686d1..e345004eaeb0d9c2ad06d1aa1c939ed13ab938e6 100644 (file)
--- a/man/sd_id128_randomize.xml
+++ b/man/sd_id128_randomize.xml
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 
         <refnamediv>
                 <refname>sd_id128_randomize</refname>
-                <refpurpose>Generate 128 bit IDs</refpurpose>
+                <refpurpose>Generate 128-bit IDs</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
 
         <refsynopsisdiv>
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
 
                         <funcprototype>
                                 <funcdef>int <function>sd_id128_randomize</function></funcdef>
-                                <paramdef>sd_id128_t* <parameter>ret</parameter></paramdef>
+                                <paramdef>sd_id128_t *<parameter>ret</parameter></paramdef>
                         </funcprototype>
 
                 </funcsynopsis>
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
                 <title>Description</title>
 
                 <para><function>sd_id128_randomize()</function>
-                generates a new randomized 128 bit ID and returns it
+                generates a new randomized 128-bit ID and returns it
                 in <parameter>ret</parameter>. Every invocation
                 returns a new randomly generated ID. This uses the
                 <filename>/dev/urandom</filename> kernel random number
@@ -71,16 +71,15 @@
 
                 <para>Note that
                 <function>sd_id128_randomize()</function> always returns
-                a UUID v4 compatible
-                ID.</para>
+                a UUID v4-compatible ID.</para>
 
                 <para>For more information about the
-                <literal>sd_id128_t</literal> type see
+                <literal>sd_id128_t</literal> type, see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd-id128</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
                 <para><citerefentry><refentrytitle>journalctl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>'s
-                <option>--new-id</option> option may be used as
-                command line front-end for
+                <option>--new-id</option> option may be used as a
+                command-line front-end for
                 <function>sd_id128_randomize()</function>.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -96,9 +95,9 @@
                 <title>Notes</title>
 
                 <para>The <function>sd_id128_randomize()</function> interface
-                is available as shared library, which can be compiled
+                is available as a shared library, which can be compiled
                 and linked to with the
-                <literal>libsystemd-id128</literal> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
+                <literal>libsystemd</literal> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 file.</para>
         </refsect1>