man: updates to the passive target section

[elogind.git] / man / sd_bus_message_append_strv.xml

diff --git a/man/sd_bus_message_append_strv.xml b/man/sd_bus_message_append_strv.xml
index 048bbcac08fe56cc697829c779c3780134a6f13b..a4e8350f32861895112d234c2a9e9914806f27e3 100644 (file)
--- a/man/sd_bus_message_append_strv.xml
+++ b/man/sd_bus_message_append_strv.xml
@@ -64,10 +64,10 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
   <refsect1>
     <title>Description</title>
 
-    <para>Function <function>sd_bus_message_append</function> can be
+    <para>The <function>sd_bus_message_append</function> function can be
     used to append an array of strings to message
-    <parameter>m</parameter>. Parameter <parameter>l</parameter>
-    points to a <constant>NULL</constant>-terminated array of pointers
+    <parameter>m</parameter>. The parameter <parameter>l</parameter>
+    shall point to a <constant>NULL</constant>-terminated array of pointers
     to <constant>NUL</constant>-terminated strings. Each string must
     satisfy the same constraints as described for the
     <literal>s</literal> type in
@@ -77,8 +77,8 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
     <para>The memory pointed at by <parameter>p</parameter> and the
     contents of the strings themselves are copied into the memory area
     containing the message and may be changed after this call. Note
-    that the signature of <parameter>l</parameter> parameter is be
-    treated as <type>const char* const*</type>, and the the contents
+    that the signature of <parameter>l</parameter> parameter is to be
+    treated as <type>const char *const *</type>, and the contents
     will not be modified.</para>
   </refsect1>
 
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
   <refsect1>
     <title>Notes</title>
 
-    <para><function>sd_bus_append_append_strv()</function> function
+    <para>The <function>sd_bus_append_append_strv()</function> function
     described here is available as a shared library, which can be
     compiled and linked to with the
     <constant>libsystemd</constant> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>