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man: fix grammatical errors and other formatting issues
[elogind.git] / man / localtime.xml
index 88c84a3..b7fd1ba 100644 (file)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 
 <refentry id="localtime">
         <refentryinfo>
 
 <refentry id="localtime">
         <refentryinfo>
-                <title>/etc/localtime</title>
+                <title>localtime</title>
                 <productname>systemd</productname>
 
                 <authorgroup>
                 <productname>systemd</productname>
 
                 <authorgroup>
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
 
         <refnamediv>
                 <refname>localtime</refname>
 
         <refnamediv>
                 <refname>localtime</refname>
-                <refpurpose>Local time zone configuration file</refpurpose>
+                <refpurpose>Local timezone configuration file</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
 
         <refsynopsisdiv>
         </refnamediv>
 
         <refsynopsisdiv>
                 <title>Description</title>
 
                 <para>The <filename>/etc/localtime</filename> file
                 <title>Description</title>
 
                 <para>The <filename>/etc/localtime</filename> file
-                configures the system-wide time zone of the local
+                configures the system-wide timezone of the local
                 system that is used by applications for presentation
                 to the user. It should be an absolute or relative
                 symbolic link pointing to
                 <filename>/usr/share/zoneinfo/</filename>, followed by
                 system that is used by applications for presentation
                 to the user. It should be an absolute or relative
                 symbolic link pointing to
                 <filename>/usr/share/zoneinfo/</filename>, followed by
-                a time zone identifier such as
+                a timezone identifier such as
                 <literal>Europe/Berlin</literal> or
                 <literal>Etc/UTC</literal>.  The resulting link should
                 lead to the corresponding binary
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>tzfile</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 <literal>Europe/Berlin</literal> or
                 <literal>Etc/UTC</literal>.  The resulting link should
                 lead to the corresponding binary
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>tzfile</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
-                time zone data for the configured time zone.</para>
+                timezone data for the configured timezone.</para>
 
 
-                <para>As the time zone identifier is extracted from
+                <para>Because the timezone identifier is extracted from
                 the symlink target name of
                 the symlink target name of
-                <filename>/etc/localtime</filename> this file may not
+                <filename>/etc/localtime</filename>, this file may not
                 be a normal file or hardlink.</para>
 
                 be a normal file or hardlink.</para>
 
-                <para>The time zone may be overridden for individual
+                <para>The timezone may be overridden for individual
                 programs by using the TZ environment variable. See
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>environ</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
                 programs by using the TZ environment variable. See
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>environ</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>