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diff --git a/dgit-maint-merge.7.pod b/dgit-maint-merge.7.pod
index b0f395d9..3da1b785 100644
--- a/dgit-maint-merge.7.pod
+++ b/dgit-maint-merge.7.pod
@@ -40,10 +40,7 @@ This workflow is less suitable for some packages.
 When the Debian delta contains multiple pieces which interact,
 or which you aren't going to be able to upstream soon,
 it might be preferable to
-maintain the delta as a rebasing patch series,
-to facilitate
-reviewing/upstreaming/dropping
-individual pieces.
+maintain the delta as a rebasing patch series.
 For such a workflow see for example
 dgit-maint-gbp(7).
 
@@ -255,17 +252,16 @@ first upload of upstream version 1.2.3, you could use:
 
 =over 4
 
-    % git clone https://git.dgit.debian.org/
+    % git clone https://git.dgit.debian.org/foo
     % cd foo
     % git log --oneline 1.2.3..debian/1.2.3-1 -- . ':!debian'
 
 =back
 
-See dgit-maint-merge(7) for more information.
-(If you have dgit, use dgit clone foo,
-rather than plain git clone.)
+(If you have dgit, use `dgit clone foo`,
+rather than plain `git clone`.)
 
-A single combined diff, representating all the changes, follows.
+A single combined diff, containing all the changes, follows.
 
 =back