From: ahulin <ahulin@313b444b-1b9f-4f58-a734-7bb04f332e8d>
Date: Fri, 15 Mar 2002 17:45:27 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Miscellaneous corrections
X-Git-Url: http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/ucgi/~ianmdlvl/git?p=developers-reference.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=32e29a118bfe36154ddb087c2e4c8ea4cfe15b31

Miscellaneous corrections


git-svn-id: svn://anonscm.debian.org/ddp/manuals/trunk/developers-reference@1471 313b444b-1b9f-4f58-a734-7bb04f332e8d
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diff --git a/common.ent b/common.ent
index 4dc5777..0f00f61 100644
--- a/common.ent
+++ b/common.ent
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
 <!entity file-bts-mailing "<file>/usr/share/doc/debian/bug-log-mailserver.txt</file>">
 <!entity file-bts-info "<file>/usr/share/doc/debian/bug-maint-info.txt</file>">
 <!entity file-bts-docs "<file>/usr/share/doc/debian/bug-*</file>">
-<!entity cron-bug-report '0 17 * * fri   echo "index maint <var>maintainer-address</var>" | mail request@bugs.debian.org'>
+<!entity cron-bug-report '0 17 * * fri   echo "index maint <var>address</var>" | mail request@bugs.debian.org'>
 
 <!entity control-file-fields "<list compact>
 	      <item><tt>Format</tt>
diff --git a/developers-reference.fr.sgml b/developers-reference.fr.sgml
index 77d4a8a..b6b55b1 100644
--- a/developers-reference.fr.sgml
+++ b/developers-reference.fr.sgml
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <!-- common, language independant entities -->
   <!entity % commondata  SYSTEM "common.ent" > %commondata;
   <!-- CVS revision of this document -->
-  <!entity cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.25 $">
+  <!entity cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.26 $">
 
   <!-- if you are translating this document, please notate the RCS
        revision of the developers reference here -->
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
 <author>version française par Antoine Hulin <email>antoine.hulin@origan.fdn.org</email>
 <author>et les membres de la liste
 <email>debian-l10n-french@lists.debian.org</email>
-<version>Version &version;, &date-fr; (version française 20020311).
+<version>Version &version;, &date-fr; (version française 20020315).
 
 <copyright>
 
@@ -2550,11 +2550,11 @@ tous les rapports de bogue ouverts pour vos paquets, vous pouvez configurer
 <p>
 <example>
 # Synthèse hebdomadaire des rapports de bogue qui me concernent
-0 17 * * fri   echo "index maint <var>address</var>" | mail request@bugs.debian.org
+&cron-bug-report;
 </example>
 
 <p>
-Remplacez <var>adresse</var> par votre adresse officielle de responsable
+Remplacez <var>address</var> par votre adresse officielle de responsable
 Debian.
 
 
diff --git a/developers-reference.sgml b/developers-reference.sgml
index 7ffd5c1..6917d4f 100644
--- a/developers-reference.sgml
+++ b/developers-reference.sgml
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <!-- common, language independant entities -->
   <!entity % commondata  SYSTEM "common.ent" > %commondata;
   <!-- CVS revision of this document -->
-  <!entity cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.80 $">
+  <!entity cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.81 $">
 
   <!-- if you are translating this document, please notate the RCS
        revision of the developers reference here -->
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ cryptography <em>qua</em> cryptography in any manner.  If you live in a
 country where use of cryptography even for authentication is forbidden
 then please contact us so we can make special arrangements.
 	<p>
-When you are ready to apply, you need an existing Debian maintainer
+To apply as a new maintainer, you need an existing Debian maintainer
 to verify your application (an <em>advocate</em>).  After you have
 contributed to Debian for a while, and you want to apply to become a
 registered developer, an existing developer with whom you
@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ name="applications status board">.
 For more details, please consult <url id="&url-newmaint;" name="New
 Maintainer's Corner"> at the Debian web site.  Make sure that you
 are familiar with the necessary steps of the New Maintainer process
-before actually applying.  If you are prepared well, you can save
+before actually applying.  If you are well prepared, you can save
 a lot of timer later on.
 
 
@@ -363,14 +363,14 @@ for help on &email-debian-qa; or &email-debian-devel;).
       <p>
 If you notice that a package is lacking maintenance, you should
 make sure the maintainer is active and will continue to work on
-their packages. Try contacting them yourself.
+his packages. Try contacting him yourself.
       <p>
 If you do not get a reply after a few weeks you should collect all 
-useful information about this maintainer. Start by logging in to 
-the <url id="http://db.debian.org" name="Debian Developer's Database">
+useful information about this maintainer. Start by logging into 
+the <url id="&url-debian-db;" name="Debian Developer's Database">
 and doing a full search to check whether the maintainer is on vacation
-and when they were last seen. Collect any important package names
-they maintain and any Release Critical bugs filled against them.
+and when he was last seen. Collect any important package names
+he maintains and any Release Critical bugs filled against them.
       <p>
 Send all this information to &email-debian-qa;, in order to let the 
 QA people do whatever is needed.
@@ -773,7 +773,7 @@ until the distribution is prepared for release, as decided by the
 release manager.  At the end of the last test cycle, the
 <em>testing</em> distribution is renamed to <em>stable</em>,
 overriding the old <em>stable</em> distribution, which is removed at
-that time (although they can be found at <tt>archive-host;</tt>).
+that time (although it can be found at <tt>&archive-host;</tt>).
 	<p>
 This development cycle is based on the assumption that the
 <em>unstable</em> distribution becomes <em>stable</em> after passing a
@@ -1941,7 +1941,7 @@ outlining all the open bugs against your packages:
 # ask for weekly reports of bugs in my packages
 &cron-bug-report;
 </example>
-Replace <var>maintainer-address</var> with you official Debian
+Replace <var>address</var> with you official Debian
 maintainer address.
 
       <sect id="submit-bug">Submitting Bugs