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 <!DOCTYPE chapter PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN"
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+  <!ENTITY % commondata SYSTEM "common.ent" > %commondata;
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 <chapter id="scope">
 <title>Scope of This Document</title>
 <para>
 The purpose of this document is to provide an overview of the recommended
 procedures and the available resources for Debian developers.
 </para>
+<!-- FIXME: rewrites -->
 <para>
 The procedures discussed within include how to become a maintainer (<xref
-linkend="new-maintainer"/> ); how to create new packages (<xref
-linkend="newpackage"/> ) and how to upload packages (<xref linkend="upload"/>
-); how to handle bug reports (<xref linkend="bug-handling"/> ); how to move,
-remove, or orphan packages (<xref linkend="archive-manip"/> ); how to port
-packages (<xref linkend="porting"/> ); and how and when to do interim releases
-of other maintainers' packages (<xref linkend="nmu"/> ).
+linkend="new-maintainer"/>); how to create new packages (<xref
+linkend="newpackage"/>) and how to upload packages (<xref linkend="upload"/>);
+how to handle bug reports (<xref linkend="bug-handling"/>); how to move,
+remove, or orphan packages (<xref linkend="archive-manip"/>); how to port
+packages (<xref linkend="porting"/>); and how and when to do interim releases
+of other maintainers' packages (<xref linkend="nmu"/>).
 </para>
 <para>
 The resources discussed in this reference include the mailing lists (<xref
-linkend="mailing-lists"/> ) and servers (<xref linkend="server-machines"/> ); a
-discussion of the structure of the Debian archive (<xref linkend="archive"/> );
+linkend="mailing-lists"/>) and servers (<xref linkend="server-machines"/>); a
+discussion of the structure of the Debian archive (<xref linkend="archive"/>);
 explanation of the different servers which accept package uploads (<xref
-linkend="upload-ftp-master"/> ); and a discussion of resources which can help
-maintainers with the quality of their packages (<xref linkend="tools"/> ).
+linkend="upload-ftp-master"/>); and a discussion of resources which can help
+maintainers with the quality of their packages (<xref linkend="tools"/>).
 </para>
 <para>
 It should be clear that this reference does not discuss the technical details
 of Debian packages nor how to generate them.  Nor does this reference detail
 the standards to which Debian software must comply.  All of such information
-can be found in the <ulink
-url="http://www.debian.org/doc/debian-policy/">Debian Policy Manual</ulink>.
+can be found in the <ulink url="&url-debian-policy;">Debian
+Policy Manual</ulink>.
 </para>
 <para>
 Furthermore, this document is <emphasis>not an expression of formal