From: Ian Jackson <ijackson@chiark.greenend.org.uk>
Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2015 23:36:28 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: manpage-request wip
X-Git-Url: http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/ucgi/~ianmdlvl/git?a=commitdiff_plain;h=0bbe2c2d3eeddd1479f690ff5bbe5258a4191866;p=dgit-junk.git

manpage-request wip
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diff --git a/manpage-request b/manpage-request
index 00b0543..e904810 100644
--- a/manpage-request
+++ b/manpage-request
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ central dgit server.
 
 The tree contents (in git terminology) of that branch correspond
 precisely to the contents of the corresponding source package.  (In
-more detail: dgit needs a `patches-applied packaging branch without
+more detail: dgit records a `patches-applied packaging branch without
 .pc directory'.)
 
 The commit graph structure of the dgit branch is primarily up to the
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ maintainer.  The only requirements imposed by dgit are that:
 successive uploads are fast forwards; and, that NMUs are represented
 by linear commit(s) on the tip of that branch.
 
-When a maintainer is using TOOL and dgit, it is TOOL which determines
-the commit structure, subject to the constraints above.
+When a maintainer is using dgit with TOOL, it is TOOL which determines
+the commit structure, subject to these constraints.
 
 
 3. Suggsted manpage skeleton