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diff --git a/man/timedatectl.xml b/man/timedatectl.xml
index e291f04e1..be0ad3f01 100644
--- a/man/timedatectl.xml
+++ b/man/timedatectl.xml
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><option>--no-ask-password</option></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>Don't query the user
+                                <listitem><para>Do not query the user
                                 for authentication for privileged
                                 operations.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
 
                                 <listitem><para>Execute the operation
                                 remotely. Specify a hostname, or
-                                username and hostname separated by @,
+                                username and hostname separated by <literal>@</literal>,
                                 to connect to. This will use SSH to
                                 talk to a remote
                                 system.</para></listitem>
@@ -122,10 +122,10 @@
 
                                 <listitem><para>If
                                 <command>set-local-rtc</command> is
-                                invoked and this option is passed the
+                                invoked and this option is passed, the
                                 system clock is synchronized from the
                                 RTC again, taking the new setting into
-                                account. Otherwise the RTC is
+                                account. Otherwise, the RTC is
                                 synchronized from the system
                                 clock.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -158,10 +158,10 @@
 
                                 <listitem><para>Set the system time
                                 zone to the specified value. Available
-                                time zones can be listed with
+                                timezones can be listed with
                                 <command>list-timezones</command>. If
                                 the RTC is configured to be in the
-                                local time this will also update the
+                                local time, this will also update the
                                 RTC time. This call will alter the
                                 <filename>/etc/localtime</filename>
                                 symlink. See
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@
                                 <listitem><para>List available time
                                 zones, one per line. Entries from the
                                 list can be set as the system
-                                time zone with
+                                timezone with
                                 <command>set-timezone</command>.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
@@ -184,17 +184,17 @@
                                 <term><command>set-local-rtc [BOOL]</command></term>
 
                                 <listitem><para>Takes a boolean
-                                argument. If <literal>0</literal> the
+                                argument. If <literal>0</literal>, the
                                 system is configured to maintain the
-                                RTC in universal time, if
-                                <literal>1</literal> it will maintain
+                                RTC in universal time. If
+                                <literal>1</literal>, it will maintain
                                 the RTC in local time instead. Note
                                 that maintaining the RTC in the local
-                                time zone is not fully supported and
+                                timezone is not fully supported and
                                 will create various problems with time
                                 zone changes and daylight saving
-                                adjustments. If at all possible use
-                                RTC in UTC. Note that invoking this
+                                adjustments. If at all possible, keep the
+                                RTC in UTC mode. Note that invoking this
                                 will also synchronize the RTC from the
                                 system clock, unless
                                 <option>--adjust-system-clock</option> is