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@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <!ENTITY % commondata  SYSTEM "common.ent" > %commondata;
 
   <!-- CVS revision of this document -->
-  <!ENTITY cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.217 $">
+  <!ENTITY cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.220 $">
   <!-- if you are translating this document, please notate the CVS
        revision of the developers reference here -->
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@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ name="New Maintainer's Corner">.  It describes exactly the
 preparations you have to do before you can register to become a Debian
 developer.
 
-For example, before you apply, you have to to read the <url
+For example, before you apply, you have to read the <url
 id="&url-social-contract;" name="Debian Social Contract">.
 Registering as a developer means that you agree with and pledge to
 uphold the Debian Social Contract; it is very important that
@@ -715,7 +715,7 @@ Those features are documented at <url id="&url-debian-db-mail-gw;">.
 	<p>
 The &debian-formal; distribution consists of a lot of packages
 (<file>.deb</file>'s, currently around &number-of-pkgs;) and a few
-additional files (such documentation and installation disk images).
+additional files (such as documentation and installation disk images).
 	<p>
 Here is an example directory tree of a complete Debian archive:
 	<p>
@@ -740,7 +740,7 @@ In each of the areas, there is a directory for the source packages
 (<file>source</file>) and a directory for each supported architecture
 (<file>binary-i386</file>, <file>binary-m68k</file>, etc.).
 	<p>
-The <file>main</file> area contains additional directories which holds
+The <file>main</file> area contains additional directories which hold
 the disk images and some essential pieces of documentation required
 for installing the Debian distribution on a specific architecture
 (<file>disks-i386</file>, <file>disks-m68k</file>, etc.).
@@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ The Linux 2.0 kernel supports Intel x86, DEC Alpha, SPARC, Motorola
 Linux 2.2 kernel supports even more architectures, including ARM and
 UltraSPARC.  Since Linux supports these platforms, Debian decided that
 it should, too.  Therefore, Debian has ports underway; in fact, we
-also have ports underway to non-Linux kernel.  Aside from
+also have ports underway to non-Linux kernels.  Aside from
 <em>i386</em> (our name for Intel x86), there is <em>m68k</em>,
 <em>alpha</em>, <em>powerpc</em>, <em>sparc</em>, <em>hurd-i386</em>,
 <em>arm</em>, <em>ia64</em>, <em>hppa</em>, <em>s390</em>, <em>mips</em>,
@@ -822,7 +822,7 @@ ships for the <em>i386</em>, <em>m68k</em>, <em>alpha</em>, and
 support of five new architectures: <em>ia64</em>, <em>hppa</em>,
 <em>s390</em>, <em>mips</em> and <em>mipsel</em>.
 	<p>
-Information for developers or uses about the specific ports are
+Information for developers and users about the specific ports are
 available at the <url id="&url-debian-ports;" name="Debian Ports web
 pages">.
 
@@ -887,11 +887,11 @@ distribution changes from day-to-day. Since no special effort is done
 to make sure everything in this distribution is working properly, it is
 sometimes literally unstable.
 	<p>
-<ref id="testing"> is generated automatically by taking
+<qref id="testing">"testing"</qref> is generated automatically by taking
 packages from unstable if they satisfy certain criteria. Those
 criteria should ensure a good quality for packages within testing.
 The update to testing is launched each day after the
-new packages have been installed.
+new packages have been installed. See <ref id="testing">.
 	<p>
 After a period of development, once the release manager deems fit, the
 <em>testing</em> distribution is frozen, meaning that the policies
@@ -957,7 +957,7 @@ in <em>testing</em>;
     <item>
 The packages on which it depends must either be available in <em>testing</em>
 or they must be accepted into <em>testing</em> at the same time (and they will
-if they respect themselves all the criteria);
+if they respect all the necessary criteria);
 </list>
 	<p>
 To find out whether a package is progressing into testing or not, see the
@@ -969,12 +969,12 @@ informed of the progression of their packages into <em>testing</em>.
 	<p>
 The <file>update_excuses</file> file does not always give the precise reason
 why the package is refused, one may have to find it on their own by looking
-what would break with the inclusion of the package. The <url
-id="&url-testing-maint;" name="testing web page"> gives some more information
-about the usual problems which may be causing such troubles.
+for what would break with the inclusion of the package. The
+<url id="&url-testing-maint;" name="testing web page"> gives some more
+information about the usual problems which may be causing such troubles.
 	<p>
 Sometimes, some packages never enter <em>testing</em> because the set of
-inter-relationship is too complicated and can not be sorted out
+inter-relationship is too complicated and cannot be sorted out
 by the scripts. In that case, the release manager must be
 contacted, and he will force the inclusion of the packages.
 	<p>
@@ -1011,7 +1011,7 @@ into <em>experimental</em>.
 Whenever there is a new upstream version of a package that introduces new
 features but breaks a lot of old ones, it should either not be uploaded, or
 be uploaded to <em>experimental</em>. A new, beta, version of some software
-which uses completely different configuration can go into
+which uses a completely different configuration can go into
 <em>experimental</em>, at the maintainer's discretion. If you are working
 on an incompatible or complex upgrade situation, you can also use
 <em>experimental</em> as a staging area, so that testers can get early
@@ -1074,8 +1074,8 @@ symbolic links for <em>stable</em>, <em>testing</em>, and
 	<p>
 The various download archives and the web site have several mirrors
 available in order to relieve our canonical servers from heavy load.
-In fact, some of the canonical servers aren't public, and instead a
-first tier of mirrors balances the load. That way, users always access
+In fact, some of the canonical servers aren't public &mdash; a first tier
+of mirrors balances the load instead. That way, users always access
 the mirrors and get used to using them, which allows Debian to better
 spread its bandwidth requirements over several servers and networks,
 and basically makes users avoid hammering on one primary location.
@@ -1097,15 +1097,16 @@ have accounts on these machines.
     <sect id="incoming-system">
 	<heading>The Incoming system
 	<p>
-The Incoming system is responsible of collecting updated packages and
+The Incoming system is responsible for collecting updated packages and
 installing them in the Debian archive. It consists of a set of
 directories and scripts that are installed both on <tt>&ftp-master-host;</tt>
 and <tt>&non-us-host;</tt>.
 	<p>
 Packages are uploaded by all the maintainers into a directory called
 <file>unchecked</file>. This directory is scanned every 15 minutes by
-the <prgn>katie</prgn> script, which verifies the integrity of the uploaded packages and the cryptographic
-signatures.  If the package is considered ready to be installed, it
+the <prgn>katie</prgn> script, which verifies the integrity of the uploaded
+packages and their cryptographic signatures.
+If the package is considered ready to be installed, it
 is moved into the <file>accepted</file> directory. If this is the first upload of
 the package, it is moved in the <file>new</file> directory, where it waits
 for an approval of the ftpmasters. If the package contains files to be installed
@@ -1192,8 +1193,8 @@ available in the various distributions.  Each version links to a page
 which provides information, including the package description,
 the dependencies and package download links.
 	<p>
-The bug tracking system track bugs for each package.  You can
-view the bugs of a given package at the URL
+The bug tracking system tracks bugs for each package.
+You can view the bugs of a given package at the URL
 <tt>http://&bugs-host;/<var>package-name</var></tt>.
 
       <sect1 id="madison">The <prgn>madison</prgn> utility
@@ -1225,7 +1226,7 @@ the activity of a source package. This really means that you can
 get the same emails that the package maintainer gets, simply by
 subscribing to the package in the PTS.
 	<p>
-Each email sent through the PTS is classified and associated to one of
+Each email sent through the PTS is classified under one of
 the keywords listed below. This will let you select the mails that
 you want to receive.
 	<p>
@@ -1338,7 +1339,7 @@ various commands to <email>pts@qa.debian.org</email>.
 
 <tag><tt>keyword [&lt;email&gt;] {+|-|=} &lt;list of keywords&gt;</tt>
 <item>
-  Accept (+) or refuse (-) mails associated to the given keyword(s).
+  Accept (+) or refuse (-) mails classified under the given keyword(s).
   Define the list (=) of accepted keywords.
 
 <tag><tt>keyword &lt;sourcepackage&gt; [&lt;email&gt;] {+|-|=} &lt;list of keywords&gt;</tt>
@@ -1420,7 +1421,7 @@ Usual news items may be used to announce that:
 <item>something important will affect the package
 </list>
 	<p>
-Both kind of news are generated in a similar manner: you just have to send
+Both kinds of news are generated in a similar manner: you just have to send
 an email either to <email>pts-static-news@qa.debian.org</email> or to
 <email>pts-news@qa.debian.org</email>. The mail should indicate which
 package is concerned by having the name of the source package in a
@@ -3260,7 +3261,7 @@ this using an hand-crafted <file>debian/rules</file> file.
         <p>
 The following practices are relevant to the
 <file>debian/control</file> file.  They supplement the <url
-id="&url-debian-policy;ch-miscellaneous.html#s-descriptions"
+id="&url-debian-policy;ch-binary.html#s-descriptions"
 name="Policy on package descriptions">.
         <p>
 The description of the package, as defined by the corresponding field