Small typo fixes and clarifications/rewordings suggested by Karl Goetz. Closes: ...

[developers-reference.git] / resources.dbk

diff --git a/resources.dbk b/resources.dbk
index 57b3824f18faf2c02783c0a0f65be812ea79f1bd..8bab31baa86267f0ce8231e3b9fbece1ccccf483 100644 (file)
--- a/resources.dbk
+++ b/resources.dbk
@@ -141,7 +141,8 @@ similarly named channels for speakers of other languages.
 </para>
 <para>
 The main channel for Debian development is <literal>#debian-devel</literal>.
-It is a very active channel since usually over 150 people are always logged in.
+It is a very active channel; it will typically have a minimum of 150 people
+at any time of day.
 It's a channel for people who work on Debian, it's not a support channel
 (there's <literal>#debian</literal> for that).  It is however open to anyone
 who wants to lurk (and learn).  Its topic is commonly full of interesting
@@ -487,7 +488,7 @@ non-free packages.
 <para>
 Packages which do not conform to the DFSG are placed in the
 <literal>non-free</literal> section.  These packages are not considered as
-part of the Debian distribution, though we support their use, and we provide
+part of the Debian distribution, though we enable their use, and we provide
 infrastructure (such as our bug-tracking system and mailing lists) for non-free
 software packages.
 </para>
@@ -1354,7 +1355,7 @@ Once you set up the VCS repository to generate commit notifications, you just
 have to make sure it sends a copy of those mails to
 <literal><replaceable>sourcepackage</replaceable>_cvs@&pts-host;</literal>.
 Only the people who accept the <literal>cvs</literal> keyword will receive
-these notifications. Note that the mail need to be sent from a
+these notifications. Note that the mail needs to be sent from a
 <literal>debian.org</literal> machine, otherwise you'll have to add
 the <literal>X-PTS-Approved: 1</literal> header.
 </para>