slightly rearranged the db.d.o section

[developers-reference.git] / developers-reference.sgml

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@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <!entity % commondata  SYSTEM "common.ent" > %commondata;
 
   <!-- CVS revision of this document -->
-  <!entity cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.162 $">
+  <!entity cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.163 $">
   <!-- if you are translating this document, please notate the CVS
        revision of the developers reference here -->
   <!--
@@ -664,16 +664,20 @@ the Debian account that should own the CVS root area, and why you need it.
        <p>
 The Developers Database, at <url id="&url-debian-db;">, is an LDAP
 directory for managing Debian developer attributes.  You can use this
-resource to search the list of Debian developers.  For information on
-keeping your entry the developer database up-to-date, see <ref
-id="user-maint">. Part of this information is also available through
+resource to search the list of Debian developers.
+Part of this information is also available through
 the finger service on Debian servers, try
 <prgn>finger yourlogin@db.debian.org</prgn> to see what it reports.
        <p>
-This database lets you register some other information like public SSH
-keys that will be automatically installed on the official debian machines
-or like *.debian.net DNS entry. Those features are documented
-at <url id="&url-debian-db-mail-gw;">.
+Developers can <url name="log into the database" id="&url-debian-db-login;">
+to change their debian-private list subscription, their personal
+information, to mark themselves on vacation, etc.
+For more information on keeping your entry the developer database
+up-to-date, please see <ref id="user-maint">.
+       <p>
+One can also submit their SSH keys to be used for authorization on the
+official Debian machines, and even add new *.debian.net DNS entries.
+Those features are documented at <url id="&url-debian-db-mail-gw;">.
 
 
     <sect id="archive">The Debian archive