doc: typographical improvements and choice of words

[elogind.git] / man / systemd.network.xml

diff --git a/man/systemd.network.xml b/man/systemd.network.xml
index 8b2dd2f1de55180a05384592a38a818a93033ba8..5bff4d9d87a42700f639d8864e53fa243458a8b0 100644 (file)
--- a/man/systemd.network.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.network.xml
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
                                                 <para>If the specified
                                                 address is 0.0.0.0
                                                 (for IPv4) or [::]
                                                 <para>If the specified
                                                 address is 0.0.0.0
                                                 (for IPv4) or [::]

-                                                (for IPv6) a new
+                                                (for IPv6), a new

                                                 address range of the
                                                 requested size is
                                                 automatically
                                                 address range of the
                                                 requested size is
                                                 automatically


@@ -237,14 +237,14 @@
                                                 interfaces and all
                                                 known network
                                                 configuration files to
                                                 interfaces and all
                                                 known network
                                                 configuration files to

-                                                avoid IP range
+                                                avoid address range

                                                 conflicts. The default
                                                 system-wide pool
                                                 consists of
                                                 192.168.0.0/16,
                                                 172.16.0.0/12 and
                                                 10.0.0.0/8 for IPv4,
                                                 conflicts. The default
                                                 system-wide pool
                                                 consists of
                                                 192.168.0.0/16,
                                                 172.16.0.0/12 and
                                                 10.0.0.0/8 for IPv4,

-                                                and [fc00::] for
+                                                and fc00::/7 for

                                                 IPv6. This
                                                 functionality is
                                                 useful to manage a
                                                 IPv6. This
                                                 functionality is
                                                 useful to manage a