-NMU in his package. Maybe there's a release critical bug that he has left
-unhandled and that's blocking migration to testing. Whatever. If you find
-something that she could have done (better), it's time to tell her so that
-she can improve for next time. And so that she has a better understanding
-of her responsibilities.
+NMU into their package. Maybe there's a release critical bug that they have
+left unhandled and that's blocking migration to <literal>testing</literal>.
+If you find something that they could have done (better), it's time to tell
+them so that they can improve for next time, and so that they have a better
+understanding of their responsibilities.