English l10n improvements

diff --git a/debian/changelog b/debian/changelog
index 18d28f66dbe8791bb17e1ceef33fea9d5ee5d50f..11d1ea7c1daccd3e9720ee11acba76af3854f093 100644 (file)
--- a/debian/changelog
+++ b/debian/changelog
@@ -1,3 +1,10 @@
+xfonts-traditional (1.5) unstable; urgency=low
+
+  * Minor improvements to description and debconf templates,
+    following English l10n review.
+
+ --
+
 xfonts-traditional (1.4) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Add missing dependency on libsys-cpu-perl.  Closes: #657438.

diff --git a/debian/xfonts-traditional.templates b/debian/xfonts-traditional.templates
index bc45d6f7274441da99c6148ee3e603dde58b8cbd..68b1880b7aac6bf8199996acb1ffd750c18cf1e3 100644 (file)
--- a/debian/xfonts-traditional.templates
+++ b/debian/xfonts-traditional.templates
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ _Description: Generate traditional versions of fonts?
 Template: xfonts-traditional/reconfigure-xterm
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Configure xterm to use traditional font?
+_Description: Configure xterm to use traditional fonts?
  You can have the xterm default UTF-8 font changed to the traditional 
  version.
  .
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ _Description: Configure xterm to use traditional font?
  conffile so you may get prompts from dpkg about it in the future.)
  .
  Alternatively, if you do not want me to change the default, I will
- generate XTerm.trad for you to do what you like with.
+ generate the file XTerm.trad, but it will not be used.
  .
  To revert the change, simply change the key "*VT100.utf8Fonts.font"
  back from "-trad-..."  to "-misc-...", or rename the old file back
@@ -32,24 +32,23 @@ Template: xfonts-traditional/remap-fixed
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Configure system to use traditional "fixed"?
- You can have the font alias "fixed" remapped to the traditional version.
+ I can remap the font alias "fixed" to the traditional version.
  .
  If you approve, I will edit /etc/X11/fonts/misc/xfonts-base.alias for
  you, and save your old file as xfonts-base.alias.backup.not-trad.
- (Note that this is a conffile so you may get prompts from dpkg about
+ (Note that this is a conffile, so you may get prompts from dpkg about
  it in the future.)
  .
  Alternatively, if you do not want me to change the default, I will
  generate xfonts-base-alias.trad for you to do what you like with.
  .
- To revert the change to the default, simply change the alias "fixed"
- back from "-trad-..."  to "-misc-...", or rename the old file back
- into place.
+ To revert this change, simply change the alias "fixed" back from
+ "-trad-..."  to "-misc-...", or rename the old file back into place.
 
 Template: xfonts-traditional/confirm-break-remove
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Remove anyway, breaking "fixed" and your X server?
+_Description: Remove xfonts-traditional, breaking "fixed" and your X server?
  Removing xfonts-traditional would break your X server by removing "fixed".
  .
  You should not remove xfonts-traditional while "fixed" refers to one