more clarifications and fixes from reread

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@@ -640,7 +640,7 @@ $$
 \subsubsection{For $\p = \pq$:}
 
 By Base Acyclic, $D \not\isin B$.  So $D \isin C \equiv D = C$.
-By No Sneak, $D \le B \equiv D = C$.  Thus $C \haspatch \pq$.
+By No Sneak, $D \not\le B$ so $D \le C \equiv D = C$.  Thus $C \haspatch \pq$.
 
 \subsubsection{For $\p \neq \pq$:}
 
@@ -659,7 +659,7 @@ Not applicable.
 
 \section{Anticommit}
 
-Given $L$ and $\pr$ as represented by $R^+, R^-$.
+Given $L$ which contains $\pr$ as represented by $R^+, R^-$.
 Construct $C$ which has $\pr$ removed.
 Used for removing a branch dependency.
 \gathbegin